Some copyediting would definitely be a plus.
On the other hand, the story line was pretty good. There are parts that had me captivated while other parts were boring and wordy, as with many stories.
Overall it was pretty good for a free book. It had a few unexpected twists that made it a little more worthwhile after it drags on in the beginning.
Very wordy at times and many times hard to follow. Also, quite a bit of run on sentences. However, interesting and at many times compelling.
Awesome read!! I couldn't move my eyes from the screen! Not scary but definitely interesting. Loved it!
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