Pretty interesting. Lots of details and lots of action. Fast-paced. Very good on the kids point of view. Kinda of disapointed in the ending, however it looks like it could be setting up for a sequel, which I would enjoy very much!
great short story and I also wish it had been longer! very detailed!
I loved it, especially the ending! I didn't want to stop reading this. I look forward to more stories from this writer.