Reviews by Doby Millenfinger

Oberheim (Voices)

by Christopher Leadem

Total waste of time. I ended up skipping about half of the wording because it was redundant and boring. Characters are made up, thrown in, then either killed or disappear at random. There is no coherent stream of thought--no real character or story to follow.

The "book" is written almost as if it is a compilation of completely unrelated short stories by different authors thrown together for mere convenience. The initial chapter never relates to the rest of the story. The whole segment about the intelligent insects is completely unrelated to the plot.

In other words, this is a complete mess. The only redeeming characteristic is that the spelling and grammer are not nearly as bad as many self-published works.

I cannot imagine why the other reviewers felt there was anything intense anywhere in the story. This is as mild as they come.

Reviewed on 2012.02.13

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