What an incredibly amateurish piece of literature. The characters, the plot, the writing - just everything seems rather haphazardly thrown together.
This is not so much a story as a historical narration (fictional, of course), and as such it fails to have any real drive to it. Worth a read, but keep expectations low.
This is just another old-time adventure story. Unfortunately, I found this one so boring that I gave up after two chapters.
Ugh - this is horrible. You know when you have black slaves in a space adventure something just ain't right.