I do not understand this story. It is neither funny, nor entertaining. There is no discernible plot, the characters are shallow and unbelievable. It doesn't get too much worse than this.
This could have been a good story if the author knew how to create a proper ending. Mildly intense, the story builds interest until the end, at which time there is an unsatisfying twist and anticlimactic closure. Worth a read, but nothing to boast about. 2.5 stars.
A somewhat interesting story with a bit of a twist for an ending - though not a shocker. Kind of too short and shallow to get a high rating.
This is one of the best stories on this site. The writing, characters, and storyline are all top notch. I applaud the author for creating such a good work with a minimum of foul language.
Given recent changes in the political/sociological sphere, I have to find fault with the exploration of plural marriage. Such a subject has become an affront rather than an interesting sci-fi element.