Reviews by John Willoughby

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An interesting read, but the book is just too long and the numerous changes of scene get annoying after a time. It is almost as if the author does not want the reader to get deeply into the story line and so changes seem to occur without reason. The ending is just too short and a completely unsatisfactory conclusion to the story. Nevertheless, with a less complicated plot, less but more fleshed out characters and a better ending, this would be a more exciting book.

Reviewed on 2010.05.03

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