While I will agree that this book could use a bit of polishing and that some of the plot lines (a summer camp based around birth control????) are a bit off the wall, overall I'd say it's a good story. I view it as a sort of diamond in the rough. It simply needs to be cut and formed in order to reach it's potential. I think with the help of a brutally honest editor doing that cutting and forming, this book would have a lot of potential. I'd give the author full marks for effort but I think this needs some work. Having said that, I did enjoy it.