Reviews by silencio

Alone Again Or

by Michael Bassette

What would have been an excellent story was marred by a grammatical mistake every other paragraph.

I mean sure it's not a big deal when you know the author meant affect over effect, but there were a few dozen sentences where it was basically a random collection of words that are incomprehensible together. I may have missed a lot of important details just because it made absolutely no sense. I fear a lot of these mistakes could have been fixed with simple spelling/grammar checks.

Reviewed on 2008.04.06

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