This is a good book. It\'s only partly incoherent, and if you object to doing a little light editing yourself then why are you reading free stuff?
The writing is better than 90% of what\'s out there, the story is standard but holds your attention (and if you object to that, then why are you reading genre?), the characters are likeable, and if this is the first of a trilogy, then some of the apparent illogic might be explained later.
I would read more by this author, which is a nice change.