Extremely badly written. The author has a real problem with segues: there is no clear delineation of changes in time (separating today, tomorrow, flashbacks from last year...) and the story jumps with crazy rapidity (e.g. from work to sex to assassination attempt in one paragraph). Nor does this feel like the usual cyberpunk trope of a spaced-out narrator, speaking haphazardly, because the protagonist's voice isn't really very developed, either. It's just bad writing. The casual use of graphic violence (and the utter lack of reflection by the main character) is also a turn-off. I gave up in annoyance after the first twenty pages.
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