What would have been an excellent story was marred by a grammatical mistake every other paragraph.
I mean sure it's not a big deal when you know the author meant affect over effect, but there were a few dozen sentences where it was basically a random collection of words that are incomprehensible together. I may have missed a lot of important details just because it made absolutely no sense. I fear a lot of these mistakes could have been fixed with simple spelling/grammar checks.
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I mean sure it's not a big deal when you know the author meant affect over effect, but there were a few dozen sentences where it was basically a random collection of words that are incomprehensible together. I may have missed a lot of important details just because it made absolutely no sense. I fear a lot of these mistakes could have been fixed with simple spelling/grammar checks.