Black Eyed Susan

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Author: Joseph Devon
Published: 2007
Language: English
Wordcount: 5,422 / 14 pg
Flesch-Kincaid Reading Ease: 86.1
LoC Category: PS
Downloads: 2,780
Added to site: 2008.11.09
mnybks.net#: 22593
Origin: josephdevon.com
License: by-nc-sa

True love can develop in a number of ways. Sometimes it happens at first sight. Sometimes it takes warm beer, teenage nights at the beach, misunderstood conversations and a lot of persistence. A little luck never hurt either.

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He still pretends like he had it all worked out but he was still shaking when he showed up on the dock that night and he was so nervous from having to run from the police that he could barely speak.

Your father was really rattled, but he came and he sat down next to me and he smiled. I've always said that if your father's smile wasn't cute none of this would have happened. But it was cute. Very cute. I had always known that and some part of me was happy that this boy I always sort of liked was sitting next to me. And eventually he stopped shaking and we chatted for a long time and then we kissed. I don't think I need to go into details. I do remember that at one point after our kiss he turned around and lay back against my shoulder and it was very sweet but there was sand everywhere. I remember trying to run my fingers through his hair and brush it out but your father was perpetually covered in sand. That was something I could do nothing about. But that was our first kiss. It wa

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Average Rating of 4 from 1 reviews: ****
2008.11.12
C. Alan Loewen
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From a reviewer who hates love stories, this very short love story is delightful.

I also liked the frame of the story with the husband and the wife telling their love story to their child independent of each other. The subtle twists in difference of perspective add a subtle humor to the entire work.

Well worth the download and the time.


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